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I really thought I could live a day or two
In this lonely life without missing you.
But when my heart weeps and cries in loneliness
I don’t know what to do; it’s you it misses.

I tried to get on without you in my life;
I tried to move on but something is not right.
Because a part of me still remains with you
Leaving a void in my heart… making me blue.

I feel like I am filled with darkness
Floating away between space and time.
About to lose myself into madness
Thinking if your love will ever be mine.

I miss you so much; I miss you badly;
Tied to your shadow I feel so lonely.
I miss you so much; I hope you come back soon
Forever I’ll be waiting under your moon…
©2005-2009 ~Black-Jaguar
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Author's Comments

This is my latest poem. This will be included to the all-poem book I'm making ("For the Love of a Goddess") because this is for farina! I know many people can relate to this so I hope you like it!:D

I also encourage everyone to take a look at my first 8 poems since those will also be included to my all-poem book!:D

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:iconkotman:
Woah kool nice poem :+fav:

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~Emo Ninja Angel~

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:iconblack-jaguar:
Domo Arigato!!!:D

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:iconlost--identity:
you're right, i can relate to it. although i wish i didn't..
nice poem..
:iconblack-jaguar:
thanks!:D

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Poems are like birds, They have a concrete figure but free in nature...

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:iconchelsmirx3:
I love this poem.

It makes me think of my life and all the things I've been going through..
:iconblack-jaguar:
I'm glad you :heart: it. Thank you.

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Poems are like birds, They have a concrete figure but free in nature...

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